June, 2009

Submissions update

Wednesday, June 17th, 2009

‘Nother rejection today. Kristin Nelson liked the first two pages when I read them aloud at the conference, but I got this note in my e-mail today: “You have a lot of talent. Ultimately I’m just an agent who leans a bit more commercial in her literary tastes. I know I’m not going to have the right vision for a work this literary.”

It’s another example of how subjective agents’ taste in manuscripts can be. My last rejection said the work was too commercial and not literary enough. So, onward! Out there somewhere is a bear that’s the right size for this bowl of porridge.

Why tri?

Monday, June 15th, 2009
Because it is a truth universally acknowledged, that a Sunday morning in the bloom of summer, is best begun while submerged in a lake, among two hundred thrashing limbs, on a gadarene for a distant rubber bouy.

E and me, getting into our rubber superwoman suits

E and me, getting into our superwoman suits

Time to finish: 2 hours, 35 minutes, 8 seconds.

Cost to enter: $70

Cost of two Bloody Marys after the race: priceless.

Miscellany: Troutdale’s Blue Lake is actually rather brown.

What is your novel about?

Saturday, June 13th, 2009

From One Thousand and One NightsTHE IDIOT’S TALE is a magical realist novel that combines the multicultural family dynamics of Diana Abu-Jaber’s Arabian Jazz with the dark fable quality of Patrick Suskind’s Perfume.

Born with blue skin, Elspeth Najjar is an outcast Palestinian Christian girl. In Arab folklore, blue is the color of magic, djinns, and protection against evil. In the upscale Sacramento suburbs, it is just a medical condition, and offers scant protection against a mother whose postpartum depression escalates into a mental breakdown.

Elspeth’s father, Justin, has a choice. He can listen to his wife and find a different family for Elspeth. Or he can listen to his immigrant parents, and protect his daughter at all costs⎯even if that cost is his marriage.

He tries a middle road, putting Elspeth in the care of his well-meaning but difficult sister; but as the temporary adoption extends to years, the choice turns Elspeth’s blue skin into a symbol of the Najjar family’s rifts: between the siblings over their dead father, and their struggle to release a troubled history of exile from Nazareth. Only wits and some half-forgotten Arab folklore can show Elspeth how to survive in a family that can’t stop fighting, and be reunited with her new infant brother.

Review of “Shanghai Girls,” by Lisa See

Saturday, June 13th, 2009

shanghai_girlsIn her sixth novel, “Shanghai Girls,” Lisa See returns to historical China — for her, familiar terrain. This time she begins in 1937 Shanghai, the “Paris of Asia,” in its splendid, unsuspecting weeks before the Japanese invasion. See, who has already written two best-sellers about women who chafe against tradition, now explores a slightly different frontier of the same idea — what traditions we reject while at home but reclaim as exiles.

May and Pearl are “beautiful girls,” the Shanghai version of fashion models. They are also sisters, and when their Westernized father surprises them by arranging their marriages to pay off a gambling debt, they believe that their futures have been rewritten by a fool. Yet when the Japanese destroy Shanghai and all bets for the future are off, they find themselves compelled into a new destiny — fleeing the city, facing rape, starvation and terror. They find passage to America, where their new husbands await them.

Read more. (From The Oregonian, June 12, 2009.)

Submissions update

Wednesday, June 10th, 2009

Last week, I sent out two full manuscripts and two partials. Yesterday I got a rejection on one of the fulls, with revision ideas. I’ll take it as a good sign that THE IDIOT’S TALE’s first rejection letter was personal and helpful–unlike the gajillion quarter-sheet rejection slips from literary mags, which I have collected on a nail next to my desk since college.

So: onward.