Writing

Synopsis of SHAHIDA

Wednesday, May 19th, 2010

scarabRabia’s judgment of her college beloved, Ali, is wrong—she misunderstands his love as partnership, and when she gets pregnant, he abandons her to the punishment of her strict Jordanian father, who sends her to finish university at a fundamentalist school in Gaza City. She is to learn good Muslim motherhood and gain a husband; only then can she get her infant son back. In other words, what starts as an act of independence ends up as the yoke of traditional womanhood.

Yet the school is more than it seems. The headmistress singles Rabia out and offers another option: to go through the motions of the Islamic education program, but to also be trained in the government’s corps of female operatives, who will be married with the rest of their classmates to vacationing bureaucrats and carry out orders from the government. Rabia soon discovers that the secret program is not what she expected: it is a small class of misfits whose desperation is being exploited into zealotry. The women are being trained as shahidat, suicide bombers. Once in, she cannot back out lest she be stoned as a “collaborator,” and die before ever holding her son again.

The only way out is a fellow student who offers to help Rabia escape in exchange for favors to an underground organization. As the favors grow larger, Rabia advances on a road that leads to violence anyway—but it also leads to Sami, an unwilling revolutionary who falls in love with her. She must decide whether to accept his offer of marriage as a way out of a land where the veil of femininity can hide almost anything, and where every act is dangerously political, even love.

***This is about as rough as a rough draft can be. I posted it, however, so you can see how a concept evolves over the course of a year. See below.

A resource for writers, editors, and book clubs

Wednesday, April 14th, 2010

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Become a revision-savvy writer with the help of The Editor’s Lexicon: Essential Writing Terms for Novelists. It decodes, defines, and provides helpful examples of the editorial jargon used in writing workshops, critiques, and online forums. Written by an experienced editor and writing teacher, this dictionary-style reference book is a fundamental guide for writers across the spectrum of experience, editors who want to help their clients make better revisions, and book clubs and workshops that need a common language for discussing stories.

In the tradition of Strunk & White’s The Elements of Style, The Editor’s Lexicon is a concise, indispensable reference volume for every author’s shelf.

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The Editor’s Lexicon: Essential Writing Terms for Novelists

Glyd-Evans Press, 2010

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Review of “Her Fearful Symmetry,” by Audrey Niffenegger

Wednesday, September 30th, 2009

her-fearful-symmThis is a big year for Audrey Niffenegger. Scribner bought the rights to her second novel, “Her Fearful Symmetry,” for a reported $4.8 million — a huge vote of confidence in her ability to bring the book out from the shadow of her first novel, “The Time Traveler’s Wife.”

At first, “Her Fearful Symmetry” seems to succeed. Niffenegger portrays romantic love without crossing into either triteness or cynicism; in a short prologue, a man discovers that his beloved, Elspeth Noblin, has succumbed to cancer while he was getting tea from the hospital drink machine. He puts the tea aside and lies next to her. The scene is poignant, simple and says all that can be said about grief.

Read more. (From The Oregonian, September 27, 2009.)

What is your novel about?

Saturday, June 13th, 2009

From One Thousand and One NightsTHE IDIOT’S TALE is a magical realist novel that combines the multicultural family dynamics of Diana Abu-Jaber’s Arabian Jazz with the dark fable quality of Patrick Suskind’s Perfume.

Born with blue skin, Elspeth Najjar is an outcast Palestinian Christian girl. In Arab folklore, blue is the color of magic, djinns, and protection against evil. In the upscale Sacramento suburbs, it is just a medical condition, and offers scant protection against a mother whose postpartum depression escalates into a mental breakdown.

Elspeth’s father, Justin, has a choice. He can listen to his wife and find a different family for Elspeth. Or he can listen to his immigrant parents, and protect his daughter at all costs⎯even if that cost is his marriage.

He tries a middle road, putting Elspeth in the care of his well-meaning but difficult sister; but as the temporary adoption extends to years, the choice turns Elspeth’s blue skin into a symbol of the Najjar family’s rifts: between the siblings over their dead father, and their struggle to release a troubled history of exile from Nazareth. Only wits and some half-forgotten Arab folklore can show Elspeth how to survive in a family that can’t stop fighting, and be reunited with her new infant brother.

Review of “Shanghai Girls,” by Lisa See

Saturday, June 13th, 2009

shanghai_girlsIn her sixth novel, “Shanghai Girls,” Lisa See returns to historical China — for her, familiar terrain. This time she begins in 1937 Shanghai, the “Paris of Asia,” in its splendid, unsuspecting weeks before the Japanese invasion. See, who has already written two best-sellers about women who chafe against tradition, now explores a slightly different frontier of the same idea — what traditions we reject while at home but reclaim as exiles.

May and Pearl are “beautiful girls,” the Shanghai version of fashion models. They are also sisters, and when their Westernized father surprises them by arranging their marriages to pay off a gambling debt, they believe that their futures have been rewritten by a fool. Yet when the Japanese destroy Shanghai and all bets for the future are off, they find themselves compelled into a new destiny — fleeing the city, facing rape, starvation and terror. They find passage to America, where their new husbands await them.

Read more. (From The Oregonian, June 12, 2009.)